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Visual Dare #16: BELLS IN RAIN via Anonymous Legacy (@Angela_Goff) |
Seattle
The bells and the rain, how he loathed both of them. Ben hated Seattle and its rain. A child of the sun; he needed it and nature to survive.
The bells haunted him as a child and now as an adult they open old wounds. In this house, twenty years ago they ushered into the world evil; rage. He lost his innocence here and it was time to leave the past,the bells,and the rain.
He would move west; no bells, rain, terror, or abuse. There the sun would renew his spirit allowing him to sprout, grow, and start a family.
Word Count: 100/100
Wow. Such a chasing, haunting entry in so few words, and without any overt evil. Yet there is the hope that the character will move beyond his past into a new life. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing... Lots of mystery here, lots left unsaid. Very nice.
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