tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5664891494192108180.post1001954534163171466..comments2019-11-17T15:32:21.534-06:00Comments on The Geekdom of Gore: Five Sentence Fiction - DistanceAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15202160809225674717noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5664891494192108180.post-25860168026024311302012-08-13T16:54:56.517-05:002012-08-13T16:54:56.517-05:00This piece's strength lies in the way you set ...This piece's strength lies in the way you set the mood and drive the reader toward the inevitable. Very nice.Jeff Tsuruokanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5664891494192108180.post-6152102443217574992012-08-12T09:28:01.114-05:002012-08-12T09:28:01.114-05:00Well done, you capture his state of mind beautiful...Well done, you capture his state of mind beautifully. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5664891494192108180.post-72069007743513483742012-08-11T21:22:45.270-05:002012-08-11T21:22:45.270-05:00You do a nice job of giving Joey a kind of unhinge...You do a nice job of giving Joey a kind of unhinged feeling in just a few sentences, so that I'm not even sure if the "stranger" from his past is in his mind or for real. Nice work!<br /><br />BrianAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5664891494192108180.post-52375009674023740162012-08-11T06:28:58.882-05:002012-08-11T06:28:58.882-05:00intriguing.intriguing.pewjournalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01207131037845819051noreply@blogger.com